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Questions Left Unanswered
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:24:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why can’t I be perfect?
Why must I self-inflict?
Why was I so careless?
Why am I such a mess?
How could I let you see?
What has become of me?
Why did you have to find out?
How come a better life I doubt?
What the hell is wrong with me?
Why aren’t I who you want me to be?
How come I feel worse the before?
Why is it that I lust for pain more?
How come I feel so angry?
Why is my anger aimed at me?
Why was I so naïve?
What did I achieve?
What’s my point in life?
When all I seem to gain is strife?
Why is it I long for attention?
But then hide deep within my obsession?
And am I sinking deeper into oppression?
Will I ever find an answer to all that I question?
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Re: Questions Left Unanswered
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:48:53 PM AEST (User
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i cant say i liked how it was written because of the repetitions of, "what", "why", and "how". and that the repetitions werent consistent.
but on the topic of your poem. some questions dont need answers. people want to find out every little answer to every single question. do the answers to a lot of the questions matter? since the questions are yours, only you can answer them. and if you are bent on finding them, some of them will take a life time to answer, so dont live frustrated. |
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