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disposable
Contributed by
fayeelizibeth
on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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who's gonna comfort you
when your not sad anymore
when your feelings aren't bad anymore
who'll comfort you
when the happieness takes over
and my duty is spent
what will i do
i can't rescue you
(i want to)
i can't rescue you
( i really want to)
i can only comfort
( i don't understand why they don't)
and when you are happy
(not that i don't want you to be happy)
i want you to be happy
(but i don't)
when your happy
you won't need me
i'm disposable
a disposable friend
i don't know what i'll do
sitting in the trash
with the things that comforted you
in your time of need
and you're not needy anymore
and i'm not needed anymore
next to your teddy bear
(you needed when you were younger)
and the blanket
(cuz u cried)
and the pictures
(for your fantasies)
i will sit
a disposable
disposable friend.
Copyright ©
fayeelizibeth
... [
2002-11-26 10:00:00]
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Re: disposable
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 10:03:10 AM AEST
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Sad write but you should
always be honest about your feelings
no matter how hurtful or scary it might
be to face. Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: disposable
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 11:13:50 AM AEST
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| I know where you're coming from with this write... good job.... it's always good to be honest... |
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Re: disposable
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 03:15:24 PM AEST
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| cool poem. liked the counterpoints, very interesting |
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Re: disposable
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 01:19:27 AM AEST
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keep writing
in the future.
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Re: disposable
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:38:48 PM AEST
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ladeelizabeth
make the most of it. Pretty soon grandchildren will arrive and you would not believe what that has meant to us.
Good write catres the feeling |
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Re: disposable
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:41:02 PM AEST
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| Sorry I meant Captures the feeling |
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