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break up to breakdance

Contributed by briefcircle on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

How can I forgive, when my suspicions turned out to be real.
And 6 months down the road, theres a new secret you have to conceal.
Still passing out naked on the stairs at house parties,
I guess things havent changed a bit.
But you got what you wanted, you made him believe that your feelings were real
and hurting me was worth it.
But it didnt take too much to make him diverge in another direction,
was it my fault that he didnt want to wait?
Or can I blame him for going inside you, when you put the bait right infront of his face?
Cest La Vie, sucks for me, maybe one day he’ll see,
theres no room for all three....but she’ll get down on her knees.
You don’t like it, then flee, we all just want to be free.
I would have gave you the key, but you forgot to say please.

Copyright Â© briefcircle ... [ 2004-12-08 19:16:16]
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Re: break up to breakdance (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:17:08 PM AEST
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fantastic write. you had some great verses.

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