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comeing to an end
Contributed by
xxambercrombiexx
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She looked in the mirror, and back down to the blade
as she watched all her yrs. that slowly seemed to fade
see a tear falling down her face
all b/c she hated this horrible place
she hated nothing more, then her own life
therefore, the only solution was this here knife
she felt the sharpeness touch her skin
and she cared it deeper, and deeper in
she cringed from the pain getting stronger
however, she just coulnd't live any longer
she laid on the floor, and closed her eyes
as she so patiently waited to die
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2004-12-08 18:09:25]
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Re: comeing to an end
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:20:24 PM AEST
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great write... lil sad... lil depressing... but really good...
hope to c more from u soon
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Re: comeing to an end
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:17:38 PM AEST
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this is totally relavent to today, i really enjoyed reading this, keep up the excellent work!
God bless |
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