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Secret Revealed

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

All those times before I said I’d put this to end
Were all lies but to hurt you was not my intent
I guess I was too blind to see the pain I caused everyone
And with me they were fed up and done
Tired of being the ones forced to make me feel
That I am worth something and that to them I’m real
So with their “concern” they blabbed my secret in which them I confined
I guess to mess with my life they did not mind
Now forced to deal with my problems another way
Still won’t make the pain go away
Cutting helped relive me of my gathered angst and pain
Now I’m forced to talk with my parents, then what will I gain?
I wanted to talk it out with you
But my messages never got through
If only you fully listened to me, with every word I spoke
Then deep inside I wouldn’t have been torn or broke
But since you hadn’t self-infliction was my escape
Yet this is what they decided to take
Now I’m carefully watched left with no privacy
Is this what you wanted to happen to me?
So my razorblades been taken from me
As I’m dragged back into reality
My only way to cope has been taken away
And the pain I feel will forever stay

Copyright Â© EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-12-08 15:08:19]
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Re: Secret Revealed (User Rating: 1 )
by maggsie on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:31:41 PM AEST
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powerful poem, full of anger and desperation. it well isllustrates where u are. something similar happened to me two years ago and now i am slowly getting over it, my point is, i am and you will too. its just a bad lingering moment it will pass.
maggsie

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