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The Beauty of his eyes
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:04:32 PM in AEST
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his eyes are like pearls rolling along the fine sands at the bottom of the deep crystal-like ocean,
layered with turquoise and blue plaiting between each other to create a calm spiritualy cleansing medium, letting off the pure scent of fine green tea, as reeds sway with relaxed momentum, bathing in the suns tender toutch, nourished with the slow flexed current beneath them. the pearls glint from the rinse of sun through the simple clear skies, clear enough to see angels zip from cloud to cloud...
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Re: The Beauty of his eyes
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:09:32 PM AEST
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brilliant, breath-taking...i could feel the love you have for him in your description.
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Re: The Beauty of his eyes
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:12:48 PM AEST
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I have to agree with the previous comment.
Brilliant.
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