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Untitled
Contributed by
vindicated_loZer
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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she was the unnoticed,
the beautiful shadow,
the broken shards of glass
that littered the floor
and nobody ever bothered
to ask her name
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2004-12-08 13:49:58]
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Re: Untitled
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:22:25 PM AEST
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Short but powerful. I wanted it to continue it was really enthralling.
Off the top of my head some title ideas---
"Jane Doe"
"Anonymous"
"Beautiful Shadow"
I liked this one alot.
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Re: Untitled
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:46:06 PM AEST
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| short and to the point, I can relate to this very much...it always hurts to be unnoticed...well keep writing |
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Re: Untitled
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:54:01 PM AEST
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| visual and thought provoking |
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Re: Untitled
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:57:39 PM AEST
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Did you want a title?..some ideas..
pointedly unnoticed..
sharply unobserved
crystal unaware
invisable wounds |
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