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I want you so much...

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:14:31 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

ive got nothing left,
nothing left to stay for,
nothing left,
nothing left to see in my reflection,
chemical reaction in my soul,
time's ticking my life away,
losing blood,
radiating from the vein,
out into my aura,
disipate in your eyes,
all you see is the surface,
maybe what you see is just the lies,
you see the body,
you have my word,
i seem to be latching into you,
even though im hurt by what ive heard,
i know there is something deep about you,
something i dont know,
a vision i will some day see,
the real inside needs to show,,
as our secret,
only for me,
i know i would dance with the devil,
just to let you be,
when im standing close
when im near,
im in another dimension,
yet im still standing here,
i see something missing in your puzzle,
a hole in your soul,
a stitch in your head,
a cut on the surface that should have bled,
i wish i could know,
i wish i could see,
the fire inside you,
what will it take to burn for me?

you seem nervous,
yet vicious inside,
i want to break through,
into your other side,
i want to know,
have you any feelings for me?,
or shall i leave
and cry painfully?

i want you so much,
my heart is in yearning,
ive got a crust like stone,
but im still learning,
everytime you walk by,
i feel a rush,
a centred danger,
yet a need for your toutch,
i have hang ups within myself,
im looking down at my feet,
as like looking at my body,
and im not feeling my body heat,
yes im cold,
im still looking
looking from above,
i may be shivering
but my heart is filled with love,
as i look at you,
i dont care,
what the losers say,
they can work in a corner shop,
it wont bother me,
i just want you,
i just want you to know i care,
i want you by my side,
and to always be there,
a kiss from you is like a sacred gift,
priceless healing,
a memory of bliss,
a desending feeling,
into the abiss,
reaching out onto the skin,
toutching scars,
from the pain within,
the acid will burn,
but it wont hurt me,
im the one to suffer,
if only i could see,
when to stop,
when to learn,
when to look at reality,
when i need to turn,
when to stop to look on by,
when to search for another star,
in the cascading sky...

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone ... [ 2004-12-08 13:14:31]
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Re: I want you so much... (User Rating: 1 )
by jeannoh on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:06:30 AM AEST
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I know how you feel
I really liked your poem
thank you
jeannoh

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