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Forgive me, Father God

Contributed by Aika on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:38:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Forgive me, Father God, I commited a sin

You killed someone?

No, I hurt.

Have you tried to cure ?

Yes, but a scar remained..

Love heals and also kills.

I don´t want to be like this.

Just learn, you have why to live.

I don´t see the light, darkness kills me.

For your pride you don´t see.

I am not proud, there´s nothing why to be.

You are self-deceiver, don´t judge yourself.

Who should judge me then?

Just only not you, there´s a shadow around you.

Who will také it from me, when the sun is not shining?

You must do that yourself.

How? I don´t see…..

No, not with your eyes, heart must that be.

My heart was hit by an arrow

Will many times be, my daughter.

Why am I tripping still round and round?

The earth also needs a storm.

I will atone, drink water and eat bread.

Not necessary, my dear child.

Don´t stump, only silently walk
Don´t try to see but feel what´s around
Don´t speak too much, yet listen more,
Don´t judge anything and anybody, only feel
Forgive yourself , what to do you know
And look straight in everyone´s eyes
And please remember for good:
Even if scars remain , still try to cure.



Otče odpusť,zhřešila jsem

Zabilas?

Ne, zranila.

Vyléčilas?

Ale jizva zůstala.

I láska léčí a zabíjí.

Ale já nechci takovou být.

Uč se, máš proč žít.

Nevidím světlo, tma mě ubíjí.

Pro svoji pýchu jen ho nevidíš.

Nejsem pyšná, není nač být.

To si namlouváš, sebe sama soudíš.

Kdo má mě soudit pak?

Jen hlavně ne ty, stín na tebe pad.

Kdo mi ho odejme, když slunce nesvítí?

Sama tak musíš učinit.

Jak? Já nevidím….

Ne, ne očima, ale srdcem.

Mé srdce bylo zasaženo jedovým šípem.

Bude ještě mnohokrát…..

Proč zakopávám pořád dokola?

I Zemi je bouřky třeba.

Budu se kát, pít vodu a jíst chleba.

Ne, dcero, to ti netřeba.

Nedupej, jen tiše choď,
nesnaž se vidět, jen cítit co je okolo,

Nemluv moc, více poslouchej,
nesuď nic a nikoho, jen vnímej
Odpusť sobě sama a co dělat víš
A zpříma se dívej do očí
A jedno si pro vždy pamatuj:
I když jizvy zůstanou, pořád uzdravuj.







Copyright © Aika ... [ 2004-12-08 12:38:07]
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Re: Forgive me, Father God (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:02:28 PM AEST
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Wow! Just wow. This one left me without words. Deep and wonderful.
Stitch


Re: Forgive me, Father God (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:55:27 PM AEST
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great, great wisdom here...If only all would follow this simple advice.

Very well done
Larry


Re: Forgive me, Father God (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:11:50 PM AEST
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Very intuitive & wise.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Kie :)


Re: Forgive me, Father God (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:59:12 PM AEST
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You are right, right there in that one line
"And look straight in everyone´s eyes"
The truth always shows in someone's eyes.Observant here as ever before

Steve


Re: Forgive me, Father God (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:24:49 AM AEST
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there is so much advice and wisdom hidden in your words......... wonderfully done :)




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