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I wish you would (extened version)

Contributed by AdamChantell on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:10:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I reach out for your hand, but only to touch your heart
Underneath the nightlight, the feeling is real;
This is what my dreams are made of

But something is wrong, as your hand starts pulling away
I now understand how you feel
It’s not the same way..

As you back away, your eyes start to tear
There is something you want to say
But it’s not really quite clear

I wish you would love me, as if I were him
I wish you would see me, more than just a friend

You tell me your heart does not belong to another,
There is alot more i didnt know
you tell me you also can't date me,
"it's not about us, its about my best friend.
she wants to date you, to be more than friends"

you say "i stole her heart", even though i'm her friend,
"she's liked you from the start",
"if you date me, it would break her heart."

So you slowly walk away, your back facing me,
"I'm sorry chris, i've got to leave" you say softly..

I wish you would open up to me, to let me inside,
I wish you would let me explore, see what i can find.

after that night, i wrote you a letter
To help me explain myself more better..

I know what position you're in
I understand why you did what you did,
i'm glad your feelings have died for me,
i know you're her best friend.

i respect you for that, but i still had to make my move
i had to tell you how i felt, it was something i had to do

i know your friend likes me
i know that much is true, but i can't be with her,
My feelings are only for you

i dont want to hurt anyones feelings, so i know what i must do
i'll have to change my ways,
i'll stop thinking of you

i guess this is what we call fate, since we can never be
at least i've got you as a friend, that is what matters to me

Copyright Â© AdamChantell ... [ 2004-12-08 12:10:53]
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Re: I wish you would (extened version) (User Rating: 1 )
by in2thetwilightzone2 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:24:32 PM AEST
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"it's not about us, its about my best friend.
she wants to date you, to be more than friends"
this line made me gasp, it is exactly what "he" would say if he liked me. I WANT HIM TO LIKE ME I WANT HIM TO HAVE WRITTEN THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
im calm. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! good poem.

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