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Invisible
Contributed by
sweetansexy
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:08:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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That’s what I am.
Invisible to the naked eye.
Though I sit amongst the
Shadow of you,
I am not detected.
Lost,
Among the pales of yesterday
I wonder if Ill ever be detected.
I close my eyes
And discover
I am visible only to myself
Will reality prevail over the
Darkness of my mind?
Or will I remain forever
Encased in this world of
Invisibility.
Copyright ©
sweetansexy
... [
2004-12-08 10:08:01]
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Re: Invisible
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:10:36 AM AEST
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a very emotional write, you are visable to me *hugs*
pixe xx |
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Re: Invisible
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:14:20 AM AEST
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great write... full of emotion...
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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Re: Invisible
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:15:37 PM AEST
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Deep and moving write aren't we all invisible sometimes in our life. Nice write.
~DENNIS~ |
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