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As You Died In My Arms
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:03:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As you died in the embrace of my arms,
I felt like the world had crushed my lucky charms,
Felt like someone had ripped out my heart,
Ripped it out & tore it right apart.
I watched as your candle flickered then went out,
You had left me alone in the world no doubt,
I just held you & stroked your cold head,
I still couldn’t accept that you were dead.
I looked at your face it will so very pale,
Dead you may be but my love will never go stale,
I shall love you & one day we will meet again,
To be with you is the only thing that'll end my pain.
I cry, I sob but it doesn’t help me at all,
As from this world you have suffered a great fall,
You have gone, never again to return,
Never will I find another to ease my burn.
I will keep my heart for you & you alone,
Not with another will my heart ever call home,
I made a promise my love for you would never die,
I meant it & I will love you as I wait for my time to tick by.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-08 10:03:19]
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Re: As You Died In My Arms
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:18:25 AM AEST
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great write...
filled with emotion...
I enjoyed reading this...
I am sorry about ur lose
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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Re: As You Died In My Arms
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:19:44 AM AEST
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Very romantic, but a sad refrain as well. A good rhythm and rhyme. I get a lonely feeling when reading the poem, your feelings really come through.
Wonderful write
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Re: As You Died In My Arms
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:19:31 PM AEST
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I thought this to long ago but found someone that loves me for me and i for her. Maybe someday you will see he would want you to live. but never let go of the memory. GREAT WRITE.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: As You Died In My Arms
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:42:15 PM AEST
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ok, its quite simple. This poem is brilliant. Deep, emotional, flowing etc, etc. well done.
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Re: As You Died In My Arms
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:54:58 PM AEST
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Romantic, sorrowful, and loneliness... Excellent combination. I know how this is, pixie. Hope you are recovering. Perfect write, pixie. Exquisite till the very end. Thanks so much for sharing. All my love. Pen on.
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Re: As You Died In My Arms
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:24:57 PM AEST
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| oh wow......infinite power of love..... |
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