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the theme in my lifetime
Contributed by
holy
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:19:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the theme in my lifetime
I am sitting here
and looking at your drawing
what is the passionate filling
and care for me
wide opening are my eyes
with smile gently
love is the theme in my lifetime im murmuring
I love my parents very much
since i was born
I love my husband so lots
from i married him
I love my children
succeed i really be woman
I want to say love is the theme in my whole life
I love studying everything
in the big big earth
I love reading
when i am staying alone or rest
I love bringing happy and lucky
to every friend
love myself love other another love every day
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holy
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2004-12-08 07:19:33]
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:40:27 AM AEST
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a very nice write, a calm feeling came over me when I read this,
pixie xx |
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by holy on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:57:32 AM AEST
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thank you pixie for your comment ,can you see my smile eyes?
i found this site before yesterday ,i think i am so lucky .i speak english is not too good ,because i am a chinese woman,and i want to improve my english go through some english poem ,story ,song .and other in english ,i love english poem very much ,when i came here and read nice poetry ,i was so exciting ,i wanted to try as these great friend ,so i try today ,
but i am so poor in english words ,haha,thanks again ,best wishes to you .good luck. |
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:41:43 PM AEST
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holy,
I think it is a lovely start.
Welcome to YPDC as we like to call it.
Though your english may not be so good...yet. The feeling of peace and love that I get from your poem IS understood.
Good luck and if you need any help, myself or any of the other regulars will be happy to help you.
Again...welcome! |
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by holy on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:26:35 PM AEST
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jecks,thank you very much,i am feeling your kind and care ,as you said ,this will be a great start ,i think so too,
i like peace and love life ,i like quiet night ,i am smiling to face everything ,i will try my best here ,i adore your poetry ,
thankful,i have many words to say.love everybody here. |
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by holy on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:31:53 PM AEST
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| haha,i am feeling your kindness and care for (*_*) |
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:50:29 AM AEST
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Your english may not be perfect, but your meaning comes across loud and clear. This is a beautiful write and lucky are those that have love in their lives. I have been blessed with love all of my life and wish the entire world could know of it. Blessings to you.
Rita |
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Re: the theme in my lifetime
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by holy on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:35:42 AM AEST
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dear rita ,happy weekend.
i am feeling very warm from your care ,your blessed and wishes will come true ,blessings to you too ,thanks a lot. |
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