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°°°Difference°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
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Sitting in my chair, black eyes from no sleep...
Worrying about you being so incomplete..
Loss for you, Dream gone for me..
We both lost alot, We both have wants and needs...
You dying inside from life's everything...
Me i'm past that, i'm enclosed in satan's ring...
The ocean has your secrets all safe, untold...
Black room has mine, all numb and cold...
You wanted to laugh, you wanted good things to hear..
I just needed you to say.. for you im always here..
Your beautiful family that loves you so...
Mine gives no warmth, no arms to hold..
Friends they comfort you in your pain...
But i have no one to trust, and i am to blame...
Your love so Inspired me with beautiful dreams
Now in the end your love died, it seems...
I made myself strong only for your need..
When you threw me away, it made me bleed...
You found another girl you love and share with
And your dreams now with her there is no difference...
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-26 06:30:00]
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 11:28:41 AM AEST
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| As always Oreo your poetry is very touching & this one touched me! I liked this!Great write! Christina |
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 05:50:13 PM AEST
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| that is so sad...its so beautiful... |
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by Necronomy on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 10:07:14 PM AEST
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| wow, you just pretty much summed up my story too! i can relate to this %100 :( |
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:36:17 PM AEST
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| wow i really liked that one...i like the content and i like the flow. there might be millions of poems out there that talk about needs and wants and dreams but few have put all of them together and actually made sense of how everything goes. As always, thank you for this poem I truly enjoyed reading it. P.S. > I almost cried...but shhhh don't tell anyone |
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:41:02 AM AEST
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So, perfect and sad at the same time... great write OreO
Panther |
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by tollo on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:06:46 AM AEST
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"hey Oreo, this is one pome i will never foget.
i love the way you wrote it. cant wait to tell my friends about this one. theyll love it.(keep up the great work."
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by tollo on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:07:07 AM AEST
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"hey Oreo, this is one pome i will never foget.
i love the way you wrote it. cant wait to tell my friends about this one. theyll love it.(keep up the great work."
TOLLO |
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Re: °°°Difference°°°
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by nomad on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:33:01 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful yet sad write, OreO. I feel your pain, the betrayal, the hopes and dreams shattered. I hope you are enjoying warmer dreams and brighter days and nights, OreO. |
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