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This lake
Contributed by
Loopylou
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:53:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This lake
its dephs are shallow now
compared to what once was thought deep
and instead of the rapid rythem
this lake has fallen asleep
i throw a stone in
only to hear it rattle among the dust
this lake is so wasted
compared to what once was
the weed at the bottom makes
the lake look dirty green
where's the clear blue
i use to see?
this lake
what it once was
what it is
this lake full of shopping trolleys
has become the local tip
Copyright ©
Loopylou
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2004-12-08 06:53:31]
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Re: This lake
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:11:59 AM AEST
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aww this was really sad, lakes are supposed to be such beautiful and clean things, but once tainted with rubbish can be quite horrible places, very well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: This lake
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:29:58 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of where I live. A desert that should be beautiful. Joshua trees, cactus..lovely sunsets..rusted refrigerators, trash, soiled diapers..old junked cars..I hate it. And it's all because people won't pay $16. to use the dump.. Great write!!!! |
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