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Hello, You Still There?
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:27:02 AM in AEST
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Hello happiness are you still there?
Will you always tell me that you care?
Say you’ll not leave my side until I die,
If you do forever after I would cry.
Stay with me as I will with you,
Anything you want I will do,
Take my hand & don’t dare let go,
I want; I need you to ease the blow.
You & I have become good friends,
This friendship I never wish to end,
I smile when you caress me slowly,
Happiness you are my one & only.
Sometimes I need to hear you speak,
As this life can make me feel weak,
It beats me, uses me as its punch bag,
Every day can be made to feel like a drag.
I hope when I call you always answer,
Make me feel happy like a little dancer,
Never walk away wash me out of your hair,
Happiness tell me you’ll always be there.
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pixie
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2004-12-08 06:27:02]
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:30:14 AM AEST
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Perfect! A very imaginative write my friend.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by Broken_Wingz on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:34:50 AM AEST
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"Hello happiness are you still there?" I often find myself asking that question, although for different reasons I am sure. You wrote a beautiful poem and thank you for your comment on mine.
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:55:21 AM AEST
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I hope happiness always stays by your side too... i liked this.
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:00:52 AM AEST
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yes i'm here! very good writing pix.
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:23:23 AM AEST
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| We all hope that happiness stays - sometimes the fear of losing it is overwhelms all else. Thanks for writing. |
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by holy on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:10:37 AM AEST
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pixie ,love to read your poetry ,all rhyme in the wonderful words ,and take lovely desire to me ,
hello ,you still there?i hope when i call you always answer ,make me feel happy like a little dancer ,never walk away wash me out of your hair ,happiness tell me you ll always be there ......
touching and moving very very ,sweetly writer |
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:57:35 AM AEST
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| I like the persona you gave to a feeling. Nice write, pixie. Take care. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Hello, You Still There?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:02:00 AM AEST
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| What a great idea! asking happiness to stick around..maybe I'll try that. Good job, pixilator.. |
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