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Black Christmas
Contributed by
pander
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:15:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As Christmas time comes
The world really hums
Most peole are jolly and bright
But deep in my heart
I am being torn apart
In darkness and can't see the light
It's to do with a girl
Who took over my world
Who I love more than words can explain
But it's easy to see
That she doesn't love me
And it's causing me oh so much pain
She's tried to be nice
Give me friendly advice
She's told me that she's not in love
But my heart is hell-bent
Because she's heaven sent
Like an angel beamed down from above
We'll still be friends
But my further hopes end
My future has hit a stone wall
As others pass by
I just don't bat an eye
On her I have gambled it all
Copyright ©
pander
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2004-12-08 05:15:13]
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Re: Black Christmas
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:55:20 AM AEST
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very emotional and moving write, it is a real shame that she doesn't love you in the saem way you lopve her, I hope this doesn't bring you too much heartache in the future
takecare
very well written btw
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Re: Black Christmas
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:22:47 AM AEST
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BRAVO!!! ( stands and applauds)
This a great write my friend. The R&R made it, even though it's a sad, a fun read.
Very well written
Barkeep!!
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Re: Black Christmas
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:39:01 AM AEST
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Sad and cute at the same time.
Stitch |
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Re: Black Christmas
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by xrockstheheart on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:17:01 AM AEST
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| its better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all --- |
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