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Untitled
Contributed by
BethB88
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:04:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Lying here
Raindrops tickling my toes
Thinking.
Sitting up
Watching the insects dance
Birds in the willows whispering
their hushed bird songs.
The rain stops
the moment passes
Back to Reality.
Copyright ©
BethB88
... [
2004-12-08 05:04:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:25:11 AM AEST (User
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Excellent, very vivid mental images.
Well done
Roses
Larry |
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