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I HATE YOU SO MUCH
Contributed by
punkpoet
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 04:01:12 AM in AEST
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I wrote this today just to let you know that i hate you i hate you i hate you i hate you i hate you..
i hate you in everypossible way!!!! possibilities inside my head think of ways to eradicate you from the human race...these possibilities are sickining...i despise the way you act the way you look the way you talk...You make me SICK!!!!! i despise the way you look at me!!! i want to rip out your eyes to save you the pain of seeing your self!!!! i hate everything about you!!!i have incubus about what i could do to you...The things you have done to me can never be undone..As hard as you hit you will never be strong
You will fall and perish in the depths of hell...
i want to kill you but i know im better then that.. i know im better then you! and i bet you do too...my hate for you im trying to explain but it all wont come out...of my dman condemd brain!! How can you live with what you do..if i had my own way id ******* have you through... Id slit Your BLOODY throat and make you watch yourself bleed !!!make you watch like u made me!!! IM not a bad person although it may seem so by my cruel, dispiteful, hollow words of hate..but u deserve every single one!!!!!!! i wish you were dead!!! dead as my heart!!! You ****** touch me ever again i will not hesitate to end your worthless life!!! ill blow your ****** brains out!!!!
i wrote this today just to let you know i hate you i hate you i hate you
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Re: I HATE YOU SO MUCH
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by punkpoet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:10:34 AM AEST
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Please comment.. i like to hear what u think about my poems... and be honest :D thanks
punk poet |
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Re: I HATE YOU SO MUCH
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:47:21 AM AEST
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I couldnt get into this.
It didnt strike me as a poem at all.
Just random out bursts of anger.
There was no rythm, which wouldnt matter if there was rhyme...but there wasnt any of that either.
There was no interesting use of words, just anger expressed in simple form.
I give this a 1 out of 5. |
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Re: I HATE YOU SO MUCH
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by Jenn2004 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 11:00:47 AM AEST
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| good venting, did u read my song i wrote called "hater:? |
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Re: I HATE YOU SO MUCH
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:41:42 PM AEST
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hey! like you said, you were going ot start writing random... blurbs, instead of full on poetry, and I really enjoyed reading this...
it was very explanitory of what you were feeling, and how that "particular person" made you feel
well keep up the good work, others may not like it just because of the freeness of this peice, but none-the-less you're still one of my faves to read , so once again keep up the good work
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: I HATE YOU SO MUCH
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:40:37 PM AEST
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well done! ur angry is just so full of pain and its like it jumps off the page and hits you in the face. brutally honest, good job. im gonna post my poem "what to say" about hatred soon, please read it if u get the chance. good job again
punka rach xxxxx |
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Re: I HATE YOU SO MUCH
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:40:31 AM AEST
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Venting is good! Better to put it down on paper than to get up in someone's face or let the anger eat away at the soul (I have yet to learn either lesson). Yup, I've so been here too many times.
peace
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