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A beautiful day with my love......
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:07:29 AM in AEST
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When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2004-12-08 03:07:29]
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Re: A beautiful day with my love......
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:29:58 AM AEST
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A beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A beautiful day with my love......
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by ButchCorpuz on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 11:11:31 AM AEST
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It's good that you expressed in this poem how much in love you are. Good work!
-Butch |
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Re: A beautiful day with my love......
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:22:01 PM AEST
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| Wow, I loved it, loved it, loved it! Beautiful. |
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Re: A beautiful day with my love......
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:51:52 AM AEST
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| It's beautiful to see such love swirling around the pages of this website... |
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Re: A beautiful day with my love......
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by Inverted on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 01:29:42 PM AEST
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| i really like it, good write, youve captured what being in love with someone is really like |
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