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Star Light Baby
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:47:36 PM in AEST
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blue eyed baby like the sky,
smiles so sweet make me high
forever love is what I've found
life is better with you around
precious moments I sacredly hold
ours, a story, yet to be told
floating in a fairy tale dream
this is a reality I have never seen
thank you baby for being you
I love every little thing you do
completed, yes, now we are
you are my shining star
when I lose the will to live
your eyes to me strength give
a tiny being, yet so powerful
even a gigle makes me emotional
I cherish you AJ, for you are mine
and I will love you until the end of time.
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:32:20 AM AEST
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| Aww sweet one. This is a great poem. Full of emotion. I hope AJ will see this when he is older because this is a poem you both should share. I also hope that he will appreciate you and be thankful to have such a sweet, caring, and loving mother as you are. Any one would be lucky to have a mother like you. Keep up your writing, you have an amazing ability to create such heartfelt poems. Nice write, love ya! |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:44:57 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull.
My children are grown but they still give me a reason, also the grandkids.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
A masterpeice to any mother. |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:24:30 AM AEST
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Oh Jocelyn this is so sweet, very imotional and caring for AJ. I love this it made me teary at the end.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:23:55 AM AEST
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Awww how sweet,
I love babies, shame they have to grow up really. This was a lovely heartfelt poem, loved it.
Ali xx |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:12:14 AM AEST
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awww that was so lovely, made me smile while reading :) *jhugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:29:54 AM AEST
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Nothing is more precious and amazing than the love between mother and child -
Thanks for writing. |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:06:47 PM AEST
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aww what a sweet poem I loved it... nothing
more needs to be said.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:17:11 PM AEST
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AAWWWWW, it's so cute.
If anyone needs me I'll be throwing up.
Hey, great job on this. |
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Re: Star Light Baby
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:27:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful-just beautiful
I read the poem threesome
This is so much better
I love your choice of words
In your image-in Gods image
Imagine
The reason for living
A great mother child love poem
Keep up your good writtings
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