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Left Here
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Like fragility she left me
To dwell on winter skin
And cry with blood-stained tear drops
That leave me cold within
The wings she bore were tattered
Stained with blood and ash and scorn
She left with one last whisper
As I lay amid these thorns
I am empty and I'm broken
It's almost like losing myself
This hellish shell has shifted
To see just how she felt
Her life was dripped with cruelty
And she bled crimson regret
For all the hate she felt inside
And small precedants set
I'll miss you when the spring comes
For you always loved the rain
And I'll miss you ever after
And wish you home again
Copyright ©
Saitou-sama
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2004-12-07 20:09:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Left Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:55:26 PM AEST (User
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amazing write. powerful and emotional. written well. |
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Re: Left Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngelEmmA on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:24:26 AM AEST (User
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i loved it. its an awesome write. |
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Re: Left Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:10:34 PM AEST (User
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Aww, that is such a beauty! So sweet and sad. |
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