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Living for Nothing
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
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Living for Nothing
These dead words
Written on paper
These soundless chords
Struck to not matter
These senseless thoughts
Fill the cobwebs of my mind
These ambitions I've sought
For the answers I didn't find
These tears cried
For what I've lost
These memories I've tried
To forget at all costs
These things fill my life forever more
And they are no longer enough
Because they aren't worth living for
But they are all I have left to love
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2004-12-07 19:40:00]
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:14:30 PM AEST
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Grasp what ever you can to hold the love in your heart...for once lost you will be on my path...seek the love hold it for its worth...never lose touch with that feeling.
Beatufiully written and with so much emotion...so vivid and clear...painting a very intense image... |
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:32:43 PM AEST
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this is how i feel everyday
very powerful and easy to understand |
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:39:55 PM AEST
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| aw, I'm sorry jen, feel better, most people here feel that too |
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:05:45 PM AEST
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Another very well expressed poem here..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:09:29 PM AEST
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Very well said... Can identify with this...
Jenni |
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by killingmehslowly on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:53:04 PM AEST
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| i love it. beautifully written, i can relate. Memories...retched things that we hate yet can't seem to live without. |
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:29:00 PM AEST
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wow girl,again a really food poem,i really like ur work,ur truely a poet,ur poems comes straight from the heat eh?well i guess so,only words that come straight from the heart r true to urself and everyone,great poem,keep up the great work,muh & hug
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Re: Living for Nothing
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by waos on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:11:10 PM AEST
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once again, awesome write. this flowed so
good together, that reading it is a huge pleasure.
i liked the end of the second stanza a lot, and the
3rd stanza. awesome choice of words in there too.
~waos |
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