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So Far From Heaven and No Closer to Hell
Contributed by
night_goddess666
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:12:47 PM in AEST
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There is no reason for your prayers.
To redeem your sins and unclean affairs.
You may think that I am benevolent
But what makes you think that I’m not malevolent
Maybe you do not believe what seems to be
And you’ll deny the truth until you see thee.
To know of my life is so know of my everlasting curse
I must cherish what I destroy and destroy the thing I cherish; do you think your life is worse?
Sacrifice your life to me, bend upwards towards my kiss
For life, as of now is only a memory of bliss.
As you lay upon the ground holding on to your last breath
Ask yourself, am I God or only merciful death?
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Re: So Far From Heaven and No Closer to Hell
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:21:47 PM AEST
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Im no doubt going to be way of track nothing new there.
But I see is a struggle...in life there is a so called balance....where one who does evil onday can do something good the next...so keeping the balance....I dont know how far that arguement can be stretched...We destroy something one day....and spend a lifetime trying to heal a our wrongs...but in the end...we all still die it is our choice to who we reach for....in our minds each has there own interprutation of what we look for and who we see once our last breath leaves...and our hearts finally cease...what we do in life may or may not effect what we will experience in death.
Told you id be way of track bit of a mouth full aint it ;D
Beautiful poem....I like reading poems that cause me to think to look inside for an answer...awesome write keep em coming and thank so much for sharing. |
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Re: So Far From Heaven and No Closer to Hell
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:47:34 PM AEST
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| fantastic write and title. i am no good at figuring things out, so ill just stay clueless =] |
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Re: So Far From Heaven and No Closer to Hell
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:37:54 PM AEST
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To me it could be either. It all depends on the individual.
Great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: So Far From Heaven and No Closer to Hell
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 10:06:07 PM AEST
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| nice poem |
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