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Music Box Dancer
Contributed by
ARemoteHeart
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Mr. Piano Man,
You're killing me ever so kindly
Sweet whispers upon an ivory wave
I've heard this song before
But this time it feels like heaven
Mr. Piano Man,
Catch my teardrops in your hand
Play out all the pain, my wrongs
Just one more time, please,
Play my song
Mr. Piano Man,
Gentle kisses like a soft wind
Pull me from the inside out
A midnight show just for me?
Intoxicate me
Copyright ©
ARemoteHeart
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2004-12-07 18:27:31]
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Re: Music Box Dancer
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:31:44 PM AEST
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| First of all, I love your user name..now that I have that out of the way.. I love the poem title..LOL.. and the poem too. "Sweet whispers upon an ivory wave" that's a lovely line... and I love the tinkle of a music box.. great job..it makes my heart feel light which is needed right now. thanks... |
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Re: Music Box Dancer
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by justjonesy on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:50:56 PM AEST
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| i loved this one...I loved the image of the entire poem....great job...you've sold me on readin more of your poems....keep it up |
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