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Tuneless Song
Contributed by
Jen54
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:17:35 PM in AEST
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I have thought of all my problems
I have thought of all my pain
I have thought of sorrow
And now I have gone insane
I think of my smile
The one I hide the truth behind
No one notices what I go through
And the tears just keep on flowing
Each time I try to tell you
My lies come out instead
These days I am feeling weak
Distant and alone
My sadness has pulled me closer
Realizing my hopes and dreams are gone
And now I'm on an endless road
Humming a tuneless song
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2004-12-07 14:17:35]
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:36:54 PM AEST
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very creative and sad, *jhugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:52:14 PM AEST
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So much sadness I felt the pain within.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by Gunda on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:11:01 PM AEST
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| Amazing, |
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:20:59 PM AEST
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Very well written I like your poem.It's full of meaning of relationships. Insane--I think we all are at times. good posting.
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:29:43 PM AEST
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Very well written I like your poem.It's full of meaning of relationships. Insane--I think we all are at times. good posting.
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:32:17 PM AEST
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Very well written I like your poem.It's full of meaning of relationships. Insane--I think we all are at times. good posting.
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:52:02 PM AEST
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This is such a sad but powerful write.
I like it. |
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Re: Tuneless Song
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:04:38 PM AEST
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| Yes of course, sad, but also lovely and great write!!! Keep 'em coming :) |
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