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Daring to be different
Contributed by
deathly_rose
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:09:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Standing, leaning against a wall so cold,
Baggy jeans, eyeliner and a tie,
All of these jokes you play are getting old.
Toque pulled down, covering his/her eyes,
Daring to be different, not the same,
He/she looks at you, noticing your disguise.
Converse shoes and chains, daring not to be the same,
You point and laugh at his/her differences,
He/she looks at you, and nods his/her head in shame.
You look at us like its wrong,
Wrong to be different, but it’s not,
We’ll lift out head high, and keeping singing our song.
We won’t break. you can’t make us change,
So stop trying to harm us,
You’re only harming yourself.
Copyright ©
deathly_rose
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2004-12-07 14:09:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Daring to be different
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:10:49 PM AEST (User
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Cool write..I like how this one flowed so well. |
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Re: Daring to be different
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:37:28 PM AEST (User
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well expressed, a great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Daring to be different
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 04:17:36 PM AEST (User
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I liked this twas a good poem, but I thought
the his/her, he/she deal got in the way of the
poem otherwise a great poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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