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Final Ray of Sunshine
Contributed by
Chaos
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Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A sky of one blue
Over a hill of many greys
Near a lake of clear steel
A parting of ways
As now fall slips past
And winter looms near
But today it is bright
One last day it's clear
And yet here I am
In a room of off white
In a building of brick
Under false light
How my heart wants to go
To run free in cool breeze
Free of these barriers
Under stark barren trees
The air'd clear my lungs
The sun, warm my face
I just want to be out
Free of this place
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Chaos
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2002-11-26 00:30:00]
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Re: Final Ray of Sunshine
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 12:42:37 AM AEST
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I wouldnt want to be cooped up
in a building either, This was beautiful
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Final Ray of Sunshine
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:17:11 PM AEST
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beautiful poem :*)
dont let anyone
ever tell you
anything diffrent . |
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