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Lost in Borth (Forever Long)

Contributed by Overstated on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:50:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The sky perched upon the rocks
Like a bee does a flower top
The sun shone down summer kisses
And the moon was drowned in this Ulysses

We held on as the world past us by
Like we were on a soft carousel ride
The stones felt so thick beneath our feet
If we can’t get home soon then maybe we should sleep

I wouldn’t let you go
I wouldn’t let the punches win
I would carry you past farms and roads
To a place that we used to call home

Somewhere here in the west
Two lost kids discovered a treasure chest
What’s lost is lost and what’s gone is gone
But the feelings inside will last forever long…

Copyright Â© Overstated ... [ 2004-12-07 11:50:07]
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Re: Lost in Borth (Forever Long) (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:28:34 PM AEST
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You have an exquisite way of showing true feelings through your poetry,it's always something heartfelt and real,and I think we can all find pieces of ourselves through your writes.I especially enjoyed your first stanza,written in true beauty and grace.All in all,beautifully done.
PumpkinPie

Re: Lost in Borth (Forever Long) (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:25:32 PM AEST
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The sun shone down summer kisses
And the moon was drowned in this Ulysses

Absolutely breathtaking and nothing less.
Beautiful poem. Great rhyme and wording.
a lot of depth and emotion. I loved this.
Very well done. im impressed
Arden

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