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Suicide
Contributed by
GothicGrrl666
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:47:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I sit here in my chair,
I do not say a thing.
My eyes are red with hatred,
In my ears does death sing.
I want to grab a knife,
and ask it to be mine.
I taste the tears that flood my face,
They are bitter of white wine.
My life has gone into a hole,
and I cannot climb out.
I'll run the knife through my throat,
and no longer will I have doubt.
No doubt for any problems,
no doubt for what I did.
No doubt for what I should have done,
when he raped me as a kid.
I want to be lifeless,
caught in a dark light.
I want to never hurt again,
no more tears at night.
No more will my heart scream for justice,
no more will my mind cry.
No more will pain be my only friend,
no more will I ask why.
The knife wispers a soft,
sharp yes so he belongs to me.
I shall commit suicide,
before I go crazy.
I take my knife sharp and silver,
I then drag it through my neck.
Death kisses my my cheek lightly,
just a gentle peck.
My blood then drips all over the floor,
a sinful blood red sea.
I feel the pain no more,
I see death comming for me.
He takes my hand and pulls me,
he takes me far away.
And as my former body falls,
I know I'll never see the light of day.
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GothicGrrl666
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2004-12-07 10:47:33]
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Re: Suicide
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:02:56 AM AEST
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Well, as suicide poems go, it's well organized and written, but it's not startlingly new. However, that isn't always the point. Depression and anger are a deep well and sometimes writes like these are the only rungs out.
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Re: Suicide
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:11:43 AM AEST
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Well organized and beautifully written.. You speak your mind through these words you have thus written. I have feelings similar to that. Not understanding things that had to come about and make us want to do things we might regret. If you need to talk or whatever I don't wanna sound like a therapist but send me a message.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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