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New Death Old Love!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
punkpoet
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:11:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Things from the past have changed so bad
I thought so much, I felt so bad
I Wasnt perfect, not one person is
So much imperfection has changed these damn kids
I know ive changed, i want to go back
Youre worth every minute, you wernt just a hack
I could get used to the way things were
I wasnt reliable, i was insecure
I think about you everyday
This ****"s so estranged in everyway
I want another chance, i want another try
Id do anything for you, ill even ******* die
Please help me out, please let me explain
Your mind your body, can take away this pain!!!
My drugs and drinking put me so low
i cannot blame them i should of said NO!!!
Now thats all gone, its all behind me
i feel like im new, i feel like im free!!!....
But theres one thing missing, theres one thing astray
that one thing is you, cause U didnt stay!!...:(
My first relationship didnt go so well
In the first few weeks it went straight to hell!!!!
Im lost without you EM There will always be an empty space
Whice can only be filled by your beautiful face!!
You spoke one day, of a second try..
i hope that days soon cause i dont wanna die
Falling for girls is such a hard thing
Teen loving is Suicide... so let it begin...:( ....:(
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Re: New Death Old Love!!!!!!!!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:18:18 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem..written well full of true feelings you have let it all flow out in this write...hope you get your second chance and dont mess it up this time. |
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Re: New Death Old Love!!!!!!!!
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by punkpoet on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:33:15 AM AEST
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Sorry guys i just realised a spelling error
"(Whice -ment to be Which) can only be filled by your beautiful face!!" |
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Re: New Death Old Love!!!!!!!!
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:35:12 PM AEST
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Wow, that poem was very strong, and it really speaks out to me... i mean okay I may not be a guy, but it made me realize that when one person in the relationship feels like it's dead, it doesn't mean that the other agrees...
Falling in and out of "love" as a teenager is a hard thing, I went through it many times, especially last year (first year of highschool in a new town)
So even though I may be a girl, I can completely understand where you're comming from...
Just remember, no matter how much that girl means to you doesn't mean that you should give up life... be strong, and if you need somebody to talk to, I'm here
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: New Death Old Love!!!!!!!!
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:55:22 AM AEST
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Awwe, that was really sad.
Again, the flow was cool, same as rhyming.
4 out of 5.
Broken_skin and ImHearingVoices
(awwwwe) X X X x |
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