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Unheard, unloved, unknown
Contributed by
Amaterian_Angel
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:01:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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With heavy eyes
A heart full of lies
And a mouth telling nothing but sighs
I sit here alone
Here, waiting for you
Unheard, unloved, unknown
With slashes of blood
And cries for helps
I sit here alone and unheard.
With wounds of sadness
And cries for love
I sit here unheard and unloved
With a soul loosing hope
Praying for hope
I silently fall to my doom
Without any help, love or hope
With all my tears unheard
I fall into silences and peace alone
Unheard, unloved, unknown.
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Amaterian_Angel
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2004-12-07 03:01:03]
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Re: Unheard, unloved, unknown
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:48:37 AM AEST
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this is very sad and I hate it that so many feel they are all alone in this world to feel like that is horrid Iv felt it too. Your not alone and if you need someone to talk to Im here
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Re: Unheard, unloved, unknown
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:30:44 AM AEST
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man thats so sad...brings back memories to what i went through and what i'm still going through...trying to block out...you did a great job...you might like my poem crying out to silence...
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Re: Unheard, unloved, unknown
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 10:40:00 PM AEST
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Profoundly sad dear poet! A blood inked work this is indeed. I hope that you can replace the blood letting one day with the love you seek. Passion like yours is sure to win the heart of someone deserving. It may take time but when you find that special someone you will see that all of these tears and the blood shed were almost miniscule pain when compared to the joyous and inconsequential love that it was made for. The more pain we endure usually the greater the reward, or so I have lived to learn.
Here's hoping you learn the same! A hell of an emotional work! Tremendous in power and in depth! Unknown, I doubt that will last much longer. Words like these can only force the world to discover you. Unheard? Your readers are hearing you loud and clear. Unloved? Years from now you will look back and see that you were loved, but just not deservingly so, but that will change as well dear poet! I assure you! Keep fighting that good fight! That fight of the heart and soul, the one that burns fields with passion. You will find your war was not for naught!
Bravo!
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