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When i return to you
Contributed by
theDeathRaven
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:43:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I can't wait anymore,
time has come,
time to feel loneliness,
time to look at the sky,
and see the unattainable eternity.
Please leave me alone, all of yours,
Please let me feel sad, only for this moment,
i just want to immerse in the dark waters of my mind,
i just want to walk in the deep forest of my sadness.
Someday i will return to you
from the travel across my mind
Like the Phoenix, i will be born of the ashes of my soul
When that day come, you and i will be one great BODY
Fighting against the irrevocable destiny
of the pain and dead
the war is determined, i know it
But you and I will be together, till the end
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theDeathRaven
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2004-12-07 02:43:59]
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Re: When i return to you
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by theDeathRaven on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:57:26 AM AEST
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sorry, i do my best effort.
If you can understand this weird stuff, this will be a great triumph for me. |
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Re: When i return to you
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by theDeathRaven on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:05:48 AM AEST
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ohh, i forget one point .
like the english is not my language. Sometimes i have trouble to place the right words that express my feelings. |
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Re: When i return to you
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by Embracing_Darkness on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:25:29 AM AEST
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| Absolutely amazing. You've done a really great job with the english too, and although this poem is sad, I like the way it leaves the possibility of there being some hope for a happy ending. |
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Re: When i return to you
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:07:00 AM AEST
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I love the play on words you used here this is excellant
Michelle |
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