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Emily...You surround My World..!!!
Contributed by
punkpoet
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:59:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Meeting You Was"Brilliant"
When we met, our hearts crossed words, i fell 4 you just like a curse
We were 2gether for that short while, i fell for you, just for your smile
My drugs were a problem, for both you and most I
i tried to Quit, i made you cry!
The depression took over, it changed my mind
Ive almost lost you, i want you to be Mine
The hard times you put me through
You broke my heart
I want to forgive you
But i just cant!!!!
You dont care about the way i feel, when im gone forever it will feel unreal
You wont realise for the first few days
Wat you could of had, Wat you could of saved
I dont want to Loose you Em, you mean the world to me,
just cause your gone, dont mean i cant dream
The dreams about you, are all in the past
They cost me so much, They cost me my heart
Id do anything for you, anything at all
Theres nothing too big, Theres nothing too small
This poem was ment for not you, nor i
But for me to live with until the day i Die!!!
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punkpoet
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Re: Emily...You surround My World..!!!
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:10:41 AM AEST
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Thats so romantic, such in lovely write.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Emily...You surround My World..!!!
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:42:24 PM AEST
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awww that's such a sweet poem...
it's very specific about what you feel towards her, and I hope that she realizes that...
Such strong words, and such a strong message...
keep up the good work.. even if it is about things that you regret
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Emily...You surround My World..!!!
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:54:50 AM AEST
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God, I love this poem. I think people will like poetry more if it's something they can relate to. If it's a poem that reminds them of something that happened to them in the past. Thats why i like this one. You have reminded me of something of my past and it made me that much more greatful of how happy i am right now. thanks. very good poem.
-KK |
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