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Cruel Demise (edited)

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

With this gun I shoot you dead
For you put pain within my head
Your limp, cold body hit the ground
Crimson blood spilt all around

I cannot say I have regret
Death you still soon would have met
But I made sure that it was I
Who brought amongst your cruel demise

It’s all you’re fault this came to be
For everything you’ve done to me
They years of neglect I received from you
Caused thoughts of hatred to break through

I finally expressed how I truly had felt
But with it you had never dealt
“A cry for attention” is what you had said
A passing mood found in my head

Never a second though that maybe it’s real
That maybe depression I truly to feel
And that deep within my twisted mind
Happiness I can longer find

And that no longer can I clearly think
Into an empty void I sink
With you’re life you greatly pay
So why does my torment still remain

Copyright Â© EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-12-06 15:09:45]
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Re: Cruel Demise (edited) (User Rating: 1 )
by BlindSuicide on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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Oh wow.. this poem is very very well expressed i felt ur anger for a minute there.Great write.Keep it up.

Much love
~Alucia~

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