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Hardest thing
Contributed by
chocolate_girl
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:15:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm sorry it had to come down to all this,
It's been so long since that very first kiss.
I don't want that distance, from there to now,
To come in between us or this feeling to grow.
Is it too much to ask, for us to be friends?
Don't waste those months, our hearts? They'll mend.
But for now, we'll get by, or at least we should try,
It's far too easy to break down and cry.
So come here my beautiful, your doing just fine
All i want is happiness, to see you glow and shine
You will always be special to me, my first love
First loves never subside, not even if u give them a shove!!
I want to see you, nearly every day so dont worry about being missed
because I want you as a best friend.. although i'l never forget that first kiss...
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2004-12-06 14:15:23]
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Re: Hardest thing
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by BlindSuicide on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:27:02 PM AEST
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Awwww! This was so sweet. Great write i wish you the best of luck.
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Re: Hardest thing
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:38:33 PM AEST
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AWW!u got that right,u'll never ever forget that first kiss and in fact u probably wont forget about the last kiss either,i know how u feel,but my ex doesnt wanna be friends bc he feels that if we stay friends that he'll continue on loving me and he doesnt think he can be my friend and not love me,but he said that no matter what happens he'll be there whenever i need him,great write,i wish the bestest of luck to ya,awesome write,keep it up
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Re: Hardest thing
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by lovingkk05 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:57:20 PM AEST
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Damn I know what that is like I am doing that right now with my ex fiancee. You did a damn good job keep it up.
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