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Not even love
Contributed by
BlindSuicide
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I can still smell his scent as if it were yesterday
But my nose seems to be playing tricks because it's been months since he went away
He smelled so sweet but never wore cologne
I still feel his arms around me at night even though i'm alone
I dream about him night after night
How the last time i saw him ended in a fight
If i could go back and change anything i would change it all
I would have never went to his house and i would have never made that call
The call that ended everything
I would have never done it if i knew the pain it would bring
I think to myself as i sit back and read his letters
I feel like i need him but the truth is without him i'm so much better
Of course i love him that will remain the same
But i refuse to sit back and watch him play this cops and robbers game
I tried to get through to him time and time again
Each time i failed i knew what was going to happen in the end
I sometimes wonder if he is cold
Or if he needs me there to cuddle and hold
I often question myself asking why i still care
The fact of the matter is it's his own fault he put himself there
He made his choices there is nobody but himself to blame
No matter how much i want him the situation remains the same
I love him more than i can sit and explain
But when it's all said and done not even love is worth all this pain
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Re: Not even love
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by MMISS on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:09:41 PM AEST
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| no matter what, you did the right thing , if he was doing the wrong thing! be proud of your standards. even though you can't stop loving him, you were right! and by the way, this is a great poem. |
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Re: Not even love
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by Overstated on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:44:33 PM AEST
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| i agree with the last comment - still - this is anm excellent poem which is raw with true emotion. :) |
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Re: Not even love
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:05:54 PM AEST
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aww,u know what hun,ur right,love is not worth pain,well to me love is worth nothing,but u know thats just me,and i agree with the others that commented,awesome write,keep up the great job
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Re: Not even love
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by Hollie85 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:44:58 PM AEST
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| Very well written. Love can hurt alot and take alot of time to get over but I can see in this poem that you are strong and will pull through. |
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