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What about the pain
Contributed by
lovingkk05
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:02:55 PM in AEST
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You would tell me stories of lobve and lust,
Of a happy, bright futer involving only us.
Bu that was when my heart was out on the line,
The end was coming soon it was onl a matter of time.
Then you moved on and let me go,
Never considering that my smile was all just a show.
I put everything out there I didn't mind to loose,
Not knowing one day that thing would be you.
But who knew one day I'd get a second chance,
To look at your love from a different glance.
I get to see how much you actually care,
And how much you miss, all the time that we shared.
But I don't if you can have it back,
If you're telling the truth or if it's all just an act.
There's a part of me saying I have nothing to loose,
But it's all up to me the decision I choose.
I said it once and I'll say ity once more,
You should have looked back before you closed our door.
I still sit and wait making my silly little wish,
I told you all about it on the questions I sent.
Right now I need you to answer one of those questions that as on that list,
What do you think will happen with all of this?
If this all just false hopes I'll have nothing to gain,
So what will I do then with all of the pain?
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lovingkk05
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2004-12-06 13:02:55]
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Re: What about the pain
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by zenmind on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:18:06 PM AEST
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Well, you prefaced this poem saying that it is "another confused write", but it seems to me that you understand what is going on. Or you at least have some insight into it. Maybe you were confused before you wrote it, but I think you spoke clearly in this poem.
Be True,
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Re: What about the pain
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by BlindSuicide on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:08:31 PM AEST
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Good write.I second what the first commenter said completely.
Much love
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