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In that Solitude
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:49:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In that solitude
there is only You.
Why?
Because, I can not allow you
to take me back there,
there to that place of
constant winter.
That place where the plants and trees
are covered in sheets
of frozen blood.
That place
where the Sun does not exist
and the Moon is the ruler
of Night Terrors
not of Dreams and
the Fantastic.
Birds do not sing
sweet songs
only horrific screams,
a Holocaust of noise.
I have watched you
through the window of my mind.
I have watched you die
on a daily basis
always taking your own life,
never for the sake of others,
but rather,
because you see no way out
and in order to survive
you feel the need to drag others in.
You are no Phoenix,
the flame of your passion
burnt out long ago
and there are no ashes to
sustain another life for you.
The weight of snow holds you down
and the layers
upon layers
you say you need to keep you warm
are nothing more than
bricks and cement
to keep you well contained
in your self-created Hell.
No,
I will not allow this anymore.
Your blood is yours,
I will not bleed for you.
My breath is mine,
You can not breathe for me.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2004-12-06 11:49:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In that Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:32:27 PM AEST (User
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wowww1,wonderfully written! the person you're writing about must have really put alot on you. great poem. |
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Re: In that Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST (User
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i really like this....excellent job.....fantastic poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: In that Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by Red_October on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:11:50 AM AEST (User
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Nardo! This is excellent work. I am printing this to hang on my bulletin board for a while. Really amazing write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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