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Pixie
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pixie
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:36:20 AM in AEST
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A tiny Pixie sits upon a mushroom,
This little Pixie is filled with gloom,
As all her Pixie friends don’t understand,
After a time they all let go of her hand.
They promise her they won’t in the beginning,
Make her feel like she is finally winning,
But after a while they fade into the background,
Alone she sits with nobody around.
She cries alone there’s no-one to hear,
Her lonely heart is filled up with fear,
Fear that she isn’t nice as her friends always leave,
They say she is wonderful but that she doesn’t believe.
Why do they go & leave her all by her self?
It’s just like they have left her sat alone of her shelf,
Oh how she wishes someone would give her a cuddle,
Maybe help her out of her little muddles.
She hangs her head as alone she sits,
Heart hanging in her stomach pit,
No mores smiles will appear on her face,
All happiness has disappeared without a trace.
This little Pixie feels truly alone,
Longing to have someone’s arms to call home,
But they all walk away they leave her in the end,
All this Pixie wants is to have a few friends.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-06 09:36:20]
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Re: Pixie
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:51:44 AM AEST
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Awwwe! Poor little pixie *picks her up and takes her home*
*feeds her pixie meals*
That was so sweet yet so sad.
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Re: Pixie
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:11:14 AM AEST
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well, in my opinion, this poem talks about independence. maybe the pixie has to live life on her own for a while bcoz i do believe that friends do come and go, its up to you if you'll let them come and eventually let them go. very nice poem!!!
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Re: Pixie
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:35:02 AM AEST
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*hugs you tons*
Well, you always have me!
*sits on mushroom and gives Krissie a hug*
Hun... I understand.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Pixie
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:55:13 AM AEST
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awwwwww, thts exactly how i felt, thts the kind of poem ud see in a childrens story book, sweet, yet so sad! all my love, trust me ul get out of it, everything changes, nothing stays the same, remember your life completely changes every 7 years, so hang on...
how old r u anyway? |
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Re: Pixie
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by MMISS on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:49:22 AM AEST
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| sorry you have to have these feelings, pixie! call for help from where help is sure to come....jesus. good poem. |
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Re: Pixie
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:21:58 PM AEST
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| hey im not pixie im no angel i am nothing really but i will never leave |
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Re: Pixie
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by Gunda on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:24:06 PM AEST
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| Isn`t like this we all feel some times? It was good to see my feelings writen of somebody on to a paper... |
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Re: Pixie
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:47:38 PM AEST
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Yes, sad and sweet...
But you do have friends!!!!!!!!!!
We are here!, we are here!, we are here!!! |
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Re: Pixie
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:52:48 PM AEST
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| Yes we are all here for you. You may not be in our arms but you are always in our hearts. Sad poem but another great write.....Mike |
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Re: Pixie
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by venkat on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST
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| Aaawwww..big hugs*...its very sad and sweet..:-)venkat |
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Re: Pixie
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:19:20 PM AEST
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Aww Pixie..this is sadly beautiful....
Hugs ya..and will always be your friend..
Jenni |
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Re: Pixie
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:38:15 AM AEST
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krissie,
This is amazing and so sad,
Like all the others that have commented we are your friends,
We may not be able to hold you in our arms but we certainly hold truly in our hearts.
I am your friend for you have been one of the most wonderful friends on this site.
Such a great write as always...
*hugs you loads*
Love
Stace
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Re: Pixie
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
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* is raising hands next to Jecks and jumping up and down to ensure visibility *
We are here !!!!
Naz ~ |
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Re: Pixie
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by pander on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 04:54:05 AM AEST
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This is a great poem Pixie. So sad though!
I will always be here for you.
Luv always,
Pander
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Re: Pixie
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by Sinned on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:43:04 AM AEST
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I like it--good inner feelings.To have one true friend is being loved. A sweet little elf sets alone on a mushroom.
Some days feeling sad and alone.
A friend comes along
Then two then ten
Let the party begin
Boom boom boom
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Re: Pixie
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by musicisluv7 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:10:23 AM AEST
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u shouldn't feel alone, i luv u hun! xcellent write tho even if it's sad.
*hugs lots*
much luv xx |
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