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Rollercoaster
Contributed by
Gunda
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:30:51 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Life is a rollercoaster
With deep blue ocean
And the highest waterfall
It looks so pretty from the outside
While you stand beside it
Watching the water flow
And how it falls
But deep inside there
Am I
Gasping for air
While the water
Hits me
And push me
Until I am there
Down at the oceanbanks
Where I no longer
Have anyting to fear.
Copyright ©
Gunda
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2004-12-06 09:30:51]
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Re: Rollercoaster
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by pixie on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:38:14 AM AEST
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great write,
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Re: Rollercoaster
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:50:32 AM AEST
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great write... enjoyable read...
hope to c more from u soon
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: Rollercoaster
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:36:04 PM AEST
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Your poems are so deep...and meaningful.
Keep them coming....
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