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He Comes To Me At Night
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:20:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He comes to me at night,
Grips my throat so tight,
Tells me that I’ll die alone,
He’ll come back when no-one’s at home.
I am scared to close my eyes,
He creeps up hidden in many a disguise,
I can feel his breath upon my skin,
I know against the dark lord I can not win.
He threatens that if I ever tell,
That I will spend an eternity in hell,
So I keep my mouth shut as I am in fear,
He is always whispering into my ear.
My soul feels like it is being torn,
I feel like a new horror is being born,
I can feel it all around me, haunting me,
From this terror I’ll never be free.
Tonight I don’t think that I will sleep,
Because into my bed the dark lord will creep,
Fill my head with fear & darkness,
As he tells me compared to others I am worthless.
He lives to torment its how he gets his kicks,
He has almost burnt away my entire wick,
He laughs in my face, begging me to cry,
He rips away my soul & tosses it into the sky.
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pixie
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2004-12-06 06:20:19]
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:24:48 AM AEST
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He's not a very nice man at all is he? great writing once again pix.
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:35:52 AM AEST
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I know this dark lord...when he comes to you at night just poke him in his eye. He aint so bad with only one good peeper ;o)
Great dark write my friend
Roses
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 07:59:37 AM AEST
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wow this is so dark, once again you have just blown me away with your poetry.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by afterdark on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:03:00 AM AEST
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| your poems keep me reading always..i love this one.. |
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:19:05 AM AEST
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Wow pix dear this write is dark very dark.
Great job.
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by MMISS on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:21:10 AM AEST
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| hope this is fiction cause it so scary. i'd be afraid to go to sleep too! great stuff. |
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:24:49 AM AEST
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| To think I have been classed as a dark lord...hmmm definately time to find a new identie lol...cool write, nice and freaky...chilling and painted in fear...beautifully written. |
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:48:23 PM AEST
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another great write pixie......awesome job....i absolutely loved it......fantastic poem..
Lots of Love
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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very creepy and emotional. I loved this very
wonderfully and oddly enough beautifully
written.
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