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Don't Leave Now
Contributed by
tWiStLe
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:11:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Like a piece of fruit, as it's life goes on it slowly rots from the inside...
I see my life unravelling in front of my eyes,
Don't leave me now
Myfeelings are locked in my heart,
In a sound proof cage,
Unable to break through the silence.
I'm being selfish,
friends have lost loved ones b4,
except they can't return,
can't be replaced.
I'm scared of losing your truth, compassion and care.
My stomachs in knots,
My hearts pounding fast,
Its waiting for the 1st tear
to break through my strength barrier of fear.
Unable to change our lives,
unable to repair the damage.
The compassionate embrace as you enter the court room connects the love
thats seeping into each others souls as i look into your eyes.
Don't leave me now...
I just can't handle the thought,
of not seeing you next to me wen i wake.
To cradle me in your arms
after that bad nightmare.
Wake me or forever hold your peace.
I need to breathe again,
this time with out that dark cloud above me
and ther shield thats ready to take the impact unto my heart
when i hear the last words echo through my mind.....
"The jury finds the defendant... guilty"
Copyright ©
tWiStLe
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2004-12-06 04:11:23]
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Re: Don't Leave Now
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:23:41 AM AEST
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| You obviously poured out tons of emotions to create this, because if you didn't, then the poem would be great and i wouldn't appreciate it so much. NICE!!! |
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Re: Don't Leave Now
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by Delusions on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 04:47:29 AM AEST
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| You may think ur skills are rusty but i think they are fantastic! hehe This was awsome hunni... so heartfelt... im just so glad that the ending of this poem did not mirror the outcome of real life events!!! So happy for you and ur snookums!!! Keep it up ~cRuNcHiE~ |
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Re: Don't Leave Now
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by unforgiven on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 10:06:35 PM AEST
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i was looking round here again and found u had written 2 more poems without me noticing. u say that ur rusty but to me u seem to be just warming up again into a brilliant poet. such emotion and fear is shown in this poem and i'm glad that i had the chance to read this poem.
luv u mwa!
becca |
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