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metaphoricly adrift.
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:40:34 AM in AEST
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i sit back quietly and quite amazed...
let my life drift upon the breeze
simply alive, truth be known
waiting for love, but its never home
Sunshine breaks out through the clouds
While raining sweet despair.
I'd be untrue to myself
To say I just don't care.
Sometimes things get out of hand
Heart and soul are vacant land
Peace is something simply sought
Given free, not to be bought
When it's not is when I pray
Asking for life in my dismay
hope dangels on a string
like slowly spinning redemption
in to deep now to ever care
so let me slip away
no longer standing here
adrift upon the forgoten day
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2004-12-06 00:40:34]
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Re: metaphoricly adrift.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:10:03 AM AEST
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excellent title, exquisite write, beautiful; and also in both style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: metaphoricly adrift.
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by freckle on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:24:15 PM AEST
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