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Opaque
Contributed by
kyletycz
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Smile yet feel fear
Sad yet shed no tear
Happy yet about to cry
In turmoil, yet unsure why
Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me
Hating yet feeling compassion
Abeyant yet on a mission
Lost yet somehow found
Always here yet never arround
Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me
You can try to see past my false face
You can try to give me your solace
You can try to look at my insides
You can try to seek what I do hide
Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me
You cant see through my soul's shell
You cant get through my soul's hell
You cant find the true me
You cant see who I am truly
Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me
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You will never AGAIN see who I truly am
You will never AGAIN know if I can
You will never AGAIN be my friend
You will never AGAIN be my end
Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me
I will never AGAIN let someone inside
I will never AGAIN show what I did hide
I will never AGAIN leave my self open
I will never AGAIN be the one hopin
Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me
I will never AGAIN feel the same
You will never AGAIN be my shame
No one will ever AGAIN know if I care
......because feelings......... I can no longer share
I was transparent
I was translucent
You got inside me
You saw right through me
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-12-06 00:09:57]
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Re: Opaque
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:34:45 AM AEST
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| i would never try to see a person just in them |
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Re: Opaque
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:33:55 AM AEST
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Very strong masterepice.
Very creatively written.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Opaque
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 03:04:42 PM AEST
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| I can feel the emotion coming through this powerful write. Great job. |
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