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Gothic Mind
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:47:40 PM in AEST
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sometimes people think
that gothics have no heart
but when were all together
no one can tell us a part
dressed in either black or red
with long sliver chains
it takes away from the world
from all the endless pain
no one understands
the thoughts that go through are mind
but without these thoughts
our hearts would be hard to find
headphones blaring in our ears
drowning out all the unwanted sounds
looking at magizines filled with
rock bands, skulls and clowns
you hate us cause were different
we hate you cause your all the same
we know we'll survive in the end
because of our cunning gothic ways
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happybunnyfan
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2004-12-05 23:47:40]
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:54:13 PM AEST
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Don't know much about Gothic but I do know u r a great writer.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Hang tuff. |
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:05:05 AM AEST
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| Awesome, you did gothics all around the world justice with this poem. |
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:36:46 AM AEST
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i really can relate to this poem and
headphones blaring in our ears
drowning out all the unwanted sounds
looking at magizines filled with
rock bands, skulls and clowns
i love that part
i agree with goth chick
great write |
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:46:09 AM AEST
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i especially love the lines
you hate us cause were different
we hate you cause your all the same
well done
xo |
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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| Nice job. |
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:09:05 AM AEST
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| this is great! I really REALLY like the last line *evil smile* |
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Re: Gothic Mind
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:55:22 AM AEST
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| another grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat one but yea the ba5tard5 bet me n leave me nuttin to say im not gothic or anythin im diff from everyone and even goths goth chics are hot lol |
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