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Dreams That Rip Apart My Soul

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:33:43 PM in AEST
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I have to ask my heart to still its self every time I look at your picture
As your beauty fills my eyes and I eagerly devour every feature
I take into my mind your face to chase away all the nightmare creatures
Those that haunt my dreams when I sleep and want to leave my body behind
But they bind me to this world and to suffering as their pain and mine are intertwined
They rip apart my soul when they chose to show things I do not have but want
Making it that in my dreams I am alone and never whole this is how they chose to haunt
Why do they make it so that I am always endlessly falling through a hole this is how they taunt
When dreams are made to comfort and make a world that you need
But why is it that to the demons my soul the dreams chose to feed
But still these dreams are not match for the beauty that is you
When my mind has taken you into my dreams where you take flight with your wings
And save my world from all evil and chase away all the nightmare things
You are my angel in more than one way you are my guarding spirit Jade
You are why I fall asleep during the day and slip into my reveries
You become my world filled with light and make me on of the devotees
You are what I need in my life and in my dreams





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Re: Dreams That Rip Apart My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:45:16 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of luv, dedication, passion and I could go on-n-on.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Dreams That Rip Apart My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:47:49 PM AEST
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beautifully written. your love for her is so sweet! great job.


Re: Dreams That Rip Apart My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:48:28 PM AEST
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soo deep..and beautifully touching :-) venkat


Re: Dreams That Rip Apart My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:05:16 AM AEST
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your love and caring is very prominent in your write

pixie xx


Re: Dreams That Rip Apart My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:01:39 AM AEST
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excellent write, painting a cool clear picture, and your words spelled out your feelings well, cool poem liked this one.




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