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walking lifeless
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Windless breeze.
Walking lifeless.
Look so vacant.
Heartless - broken.
Torn to pieces.
Heading nowhere.
Nowhere alone.
Feeling faceless.
Torn to pieces.
Look of disgust in your eyes.
The thoughts of hate you on my mind.
This feeling loveless takes my life.
Time feels like it stops...
Waiting for you to talk to me again.
The hurt from your words...
Is momentarily unbearable.
The tears I've shed mean nothing to you.
And you turn your back,
On the promise you made to the world.
Turn your back,
Become something your not.
Turn your back,
On your promises to me.
You always do the things that hurt the most.
Take my heart.
Take my love.
Break my world.
I mean nothing to no one.
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2004-12-05 23:26:13]
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Re: walking lifeless
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:34:20 PM AEST
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Very sad but a masterpeice as we all feel this way at time.
Hang tuff, I care,
emy |
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Re: walking lifeless
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by Lips on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:15:30 PM AEST
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| I liked how u ended this. |
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