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In love
Contributed by
Baby_Grl
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:36:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am in love with a kute guy,
He's not so shy, he is just right.
I cant say the name but I love him,
Please forgive me Lord for I had sin.
I am in love with a kute guy,
He's not shy, he's just right.
I am in love with him,
Sorry Lord for I had sin.
Thank goodness I found him on time,
Or else I would have done a crime.
He's the guy I would spend my time,
All on a dime.
I am in love,
Soaring through the clouds,
Like the pretty white doves.
I feel like the lucky one,
Who's haven all the fun,
With someone I love.
I love you "Meany"!!!!!
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Baby_Grl
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2004-12-05 22:36:29]
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Re: In love
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by plink67 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:44:59 PM AEST
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Re: In love
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by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:56:05 PM AEST
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| Your poem sounds nice. What is intriguing about your poem is the fact that you keep on asking for the Lord's forgiveness, what sin in loving have you committed. Well, overall, your poem is great! |
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Re: In love
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:17:08 PM AEST
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Beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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