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my dead best friend

Contributed by nikkkkki on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 05:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I sit here by the grave of my best friend.
the person i cared about so much,
i gave up everything for him.
He was the boy would could always make me laugh
He was the man who i was so close with.
I think of the good times, then the bad
bowling, skatetown, gurnee "h"ills
his house, my house, over at brad's
the guy knocking on the car window.
Fighting, arguing, constant anger
confusion.
He slowly fell away from me. until
I Lost him.
My thoughts are like mosquitoes that linger
til they finally get the pain they come for.
I stare at this dark gravestone
not sure where to go, what to do.
i had checked the mail, checked my phone
but it all just proved he's never coming back.
He didnt care about me when he left.
now buried deep, confined forever.
I feel a hand on my shoulder
"Come on, baby" he says, "lets go."
"why are you crying? whose grave is this?"

My best friend is gone, but he's here.

Copyright © nikkkkki ... [ 2004-12-05 17:18:10]
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Re: my dead best friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:04:42 PM AEST
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First Niki, I'm so sorry for your loss.
This is sad yet breataking.
It's a masterpeice as it shows the planet that only the body dies.
Great tribute.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy

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